The book as a whole is ok, but the story is weak

Voice acting is good, world building and most characters are well written. The universe the reader/listener finds themself in is also quite unique.


There are 2 main problems with the story in my opinion.

1. The excuses the story gives for why the protagonist was betrayed and why his women needed to be brutally tortured are very weak wich takes most of the believeability out of the main conflict. Weak as in the story tells us that the antagonist didn't see any different possibilities, but there were many options to be less brutal and the antagonist still went with the options:
- Steal the protagonists child
- leave him stranded alone on an island slowy spiraling into madness while he believes that all his bonded women all died for 100 years
- torture his women in the worst ways possible also for 100 years
- and when the protagonist finally finds out and tries to go after you, you send his own brainwashed child to kill him

2. Many times the story isn't focused on the important stuff, for example: the protagonist just met his own child in battle for the first time but 1 episode after they escape the story goes on and on about architecture and copulation. I think this problem would be much less pronounced if one reads the book instead of listening to it.

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