Royals
Shifter Royalty Trilogy, Book 1
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Royals
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Czyta:
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Joe Hempel
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Laurel Schroeder
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Autor:
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S. Dalambakis
Callyn Silvers is the quiet girl in class, with her nose always in a book. No matter what school she's in, she likes to fly under the radar, and is hoping that senior year, at yet another new school, will be the same.
Enter Zeke Montgomery, Graydon James, Maximus Anderson, and Lucian Harris. They enter Callyn's life like a Category 5 hurricane. All the boys recognize who she is the moment they see and scent her.
She is their mate.
All of their mates.
Information comes to light. Callyn and the boy's futures will be changed. They will bring about a change. A change some do not want to happen.
Contains mature themes.
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The Male voice is completely fine. Sounds pretty and sympathic.
The Author had good intentions and for not paying a penny it's totally fine. But there a a couple of things that could improve: like someone else wrote, less showing more telling. Everything is pointed out. Many sentences start the Same and have the same sentence strukture. And the boys need to learn to respect the female lead. Sure, they are highschoolers but even they should know, that pushing someone to do or say things they dont want, especially to strangers, is not a good Idea.
Hard to Listen to
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Mediocre
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The idea was there. The execution failed spectacularly. I do understand what the author tried to do...it just doesn't get there.
No character development. Atrocious characterization. Dialogue, and story itself, goes around in circles for pages. It's all very immature.
Constant POV changes. On chapter 13 I still cannot tell who of the boys is speaking unless it's explicitly said.
And the constant descriptions....this author apparently never heard about 'show, don't tell'.
Listening to the audiobook also only highlights how badly this is written. No reader would be able to make this good. But the female reader is hard to listen to. There's this peculiar intonation at the end of every sentence like someone is reading a telegram.
Give this one a pass
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