Breaking down plot in the middle

The Story started interesting with good Charakterbildungen and a touching story but at one point it went to fast and it got unbelievable before the plot broke down completely to what felt like a list of built points worked through.

For a the major trauma described here, I don’t see the sexual awakening happening here as plausible. Yes there had been some questioning if he could follow through before but than all just is ok… sorry I don’t believe that!

What really iterated me was that the author alway takes about the boy or the teenager… it felt so wrong in this story! Yes the character was 19 but please acknowledge that he is a young man not a child! That was kind of creepy sometimes!

In the end I had the feeling the author hat to bind all the plot lines toga the she had started but didn’t develop them . As I said like working through a list.

In the end the character development from the beginning kept me listening and my need for a hea.

From the Produktion side, please stop putting this music bits between chapters. It is really annoying!

(Sorry for typos, dyslexic non-native speaker writing here)

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