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Florian B.

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Plz let the MC be a litte bit smarter, it hurts

Gesamt
3 out of 5 stars
Sprecher
5 out of 5 stars
Geschichte
2 out of 5 stars

Rezensiert am: 27.04.2019

Really Mr Brody let your MC be a litte bit smarter... a 12 year old child would know what it means to be captured and put into slavery without asking every second what happens. Stucked in situations in which he probably could use his magic to solve the problem never seems to be an option. Man this guy is so stupid, i have to stop listening and play some games before i can start again. Thsi guy would die in every world , the real and in every game world and would never be a "pro gamer" like you want us to beliefe.
His companions always are there to save the day...

The MC is dumb like a bread

Gesamt
4 out of 5 stars
Sprecher
5 out of 5 stars
Geschichte
3 out of 5 stars

Rezensiert am: 27.04.2019

The Story is ok, but the MC is never ever a gamer. Simple mechanics seems to to new to him... in the introduction he says that hes a "pro gamer". He is acting like a newborn in every world... he should die in the real world like in the game world every day...
The world is interesting and the side chars seems to know what to do, so it is ok.

@MR Brody plz listen next time to somebody who you want to be a MC in your story. IF the MC has played nearly every mmorpg and moba, like you told us a the start... he would nerver act like he is doing in your book.

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The MC is sometimes dumb as a bread

Gesamt
4 out of 5 stars
Sprecher
5 out of 5 stars
Geschichte
3 out of 5 stars

Rezensiert am: 27.04.2019

The Story is ok, but the MC is never ever a gamer. Simple mechanics seems to to new to him... in the introduction he says that hes a "pro gamer". He is acting like a newborn in every world... he should die in the real world like in the game world every day...
The world is interesting and the side chars seems to know what to do, so it is ok.

fesselnd von Anfang bis Ende.

Gesamt
5 out of 5 stars
Sprecher
5 out of 5 stars
Geschichte
5 out of 5 stars

Rezensiert am: 04.12.2018

Die Geschichte ist gut und Stimmung. Beta Test eines neuen Charakters, welcher noch nicht gebalanced wurde und für den Test etwas gebufft wird. Teilweise nerven die Dinge, wie Stufenaufstiege, dies ist aber gut aus realen Spielen übernommen. Das Beispiel der Entschleunigten Welt als Kontrast zur echten Welt ist ein guter Ansatz. Alles in Allem, ein gutes Buch, bitte schnell mehr.